[Jean leaned away from her touch like a sullen cat. He had no idea where that finger had been. She might've just used that hand to twist that girl's neck.]
...Yeah?
[He looked over his shoulder at Monika, who seemed absolutely shocked by his sketch. He then glanced back to his picture, and then back to her. Had he really fucked it up or something? He thought he had done pretty well.]
[Since the concept of anime, visual novels and such didn't exist in his world, he didn't really see the peculiarities of that kind of art style when he looked at Monika. So he drew her like she was a real girl, even if she didn't quite appear that way.]
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...Yeah?
[He looked over his shoulder at Monika, who seemed absolutely shocked by his sketch. He then glanced back to his picture, and then back to her. Had he really fucked it up or something? He thought he had done pretty well.]
[Since the concept of anime, visual novels and such didn't exist in his world, he didn't really see the peculiarities of that kind of art style when he looked at Monika. So he drew her like she was a real girl, even if she didn't quite appear that way.]
Is there something wrong with it?